Welcome back to Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday, weekly Sunday hops where writers share 8–10 sentences from a book or WIP. The rules have now been relaxed to allow a few more sentences if merited, so long as they’re clearly indicated, to avoid the creative punctuation many of us have used to stay within the limit.
This year for my Halloween-themed excerpts, I’ll be sharing from the eighth book in my Saga of the Sewards series (formerly known as Max’s House). It needs a great deal of editing, rewriting, and revision, along with a new title, so I’ll be doing preliminary edits and fleshing it out as I go this month.
The year is 1943, and as always, chaos and comedic mayhem reign supreme in the Sewards’ large blended family.
The next day, Mr. Seward brought home a pumpkin.
“Are we making a scarecrow?” Cora Ann asked.
“No, it’s for a jack-o-lantern,” Mr. Seward said. “Don’t all volunteer to help carve it at once.”
“Can I carve it?” Max asked.
Elaine gave him a mock-sweet smile. “Sure. You need to carve sixty jack-o-lanterns for the school dance and party; what’s one more?”
“Maybe it’d be better if I carve it,” Tiffany said. “It’ll relieve Max’s burden.”
The ten lines end here. A few more follow to finish the scene.
She took it upstairs to her room with a carving knife.
“Tonight we go out to look for your Halloween costumes,” Mr. Seward went on. “No vandalizing during trick-or-treating!”
“You yourself vandalize on Halloween!” Max protested.
Marc put a ladder up against a side of the house.
“When do we go shopping tonight?” Max asked.
“At six. I plan to spend no more than fifty dollars at the Halloween store.”
Marc climbed through Tiffany’s opened window.
“I’m going up to help Tiff with the jack-o-lantern,” Max said.
His sister was wildly making out with Marc as he entered the room.