WeWriWa—Two lucky shots

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Welcome back to Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday, weekly Sunday hops where writers share 8–10 sentences from a book or WIP. This week’s snippet comes right after last week’s, when a doctor in the Czech underground arrived to tend to escapees Emánuel and Adrián. I mistakenly said his surname, Svoboda, means “peace.” It really means “freedom” in many Slavic languages. When you’ve studied over 15 other languages, sometimes you get mixed up!

Dr. Svoboda has said the bullet to Adrián’s shoulder took off a nice chunk of flesh, and Adrián demanded it be pulled out.

U.S. Army medic treating a wounded Waffen SS soldier, 1944

“There’s nothing to pull out, my brave fellow.  It grazed your shoulder pretty deeply, but it didn’t actually penetrate you.” Dr. Svoboda wiped off the shoulder wound, daubed ointment on it, pressed a wad of gauze into it, and fastened it with medical tape.

“I’ll still have an ugly scar.  I’m too old to think the skin will grow back perfectly as it was before.”

“Better a scar than death.” Dr. Svoboda aimed the lantern at Adrián’s thigh and looked long and hard before slightly lifting his leg. “That second bullet went clear through your flesh and muscle, at just the right place.  It just missed your femoral artery.”

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9 comments on “WeWriWa—Two lucky shots

  1. Author Jessica E. Subject says:

    Adrián certainly is lucky to have survived. Great snippet! 🙂

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  2. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Now that was a lucky shot! Glad he’s going to be okay (at least it seems so–there is always the possibility of infection, of course).

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  3. Better a scar than death indeed! Well said. Another excellent excerpt that puts the reader right into the scene.

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  4. Lucky indeed! Hope he doesn’t have some infection set in. That can be as deadly as bullets.

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  5. Ed Hoornaert says:

    Prior to this I worried for the lad’s survival, but this sounds better than before.

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  6. A scar is better than the alternative, indeed! That second miss is especially lucky.

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  7. Diane Burton says:

    He’s lucky to be alive. I hope he appreciates that.

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  8. A bit of luck for that soldier.

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  9. He’s definitely lucky. 😀

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