WeWriWa—On his way to meet her

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Welcome back to Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday, weekly Sunday hops where writers share 8–10 sentences from a book or WIP. This week’s snippet comes right after last week’s, when almost-19-year-old NYU freshman Igor Konev saw a pair of incredibly beautiful feet under a library carrel. Though he came to the library to pick up a few more books to pad out a bibliography for a paper due next Friday (his birthday), he decides he has to meet this woman before taking care of business.

Part of the interior of NYU’s Elmer Holmes Bobst Library, Copyright Marilyn Cole

Igor turns around and retraces the path past this row of carrels, keeping count of how many carrels he passes after the one occupied by the woman with sexy feet.  That way, he won’t make a mistake, and will know for sure just which woman he wants to talk to.  For all he knows, she might already have a boyfriend or date lined up for the weekend, but it can’t hurt to at least ask.

On his way to the seventh carrel from the right, Igor passes three men in various military uniforms, a woman in a yellow dress with white polka dots, a woman in a dark peach dress, and his cousin Luiza Eristova.  When Luiza sees him out of the corner of her eye, she turns around and opens her mouth, but Igor shakes his head.

“I want to speak with the girl on your left,” he whispers. “We can meet later if you want.”

“Oh, good, you’re finally taking an interest in women.  It’s high time you got a date.  If she says yes, you can quadruple with Ilyushka and Mila, me and my weekend date, and Zoyechka and her weekend date.”

May 1949 Seventeen

I didn’t originally have any plans to do much with Luiza (now a sophomore at NYU’s Washington Square campus for women), but since she’s at the same school as so many other important characters, I figured I’d finally elevate her beyond a minor character. She and Igor are actually stepcousins, but Igor and his siblings have grown up considering their mother’s stepsisters their full aunts, and thus their children are their real cousins. Towards the end of the third book, Lyuba finally granted her belovèd stepfather his dearest wish and began calling him Papa instead of Ilya Nikolayevich.

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13 comments on “WeWriWa—On his way to meet her

  1. Wow Luiza is already making plan when he hasn’t made a move yet. That’s a bit premature in my opinion especially I’m not sure he will know how to handle asking that woman out if he never did it before.

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  2. Ed Hoornaert says:

    I notice that you aren’t on the WeWriWa Linky list this week. Nor last week, I believe. Are you forgetting, or doesn’t Link like you anymore?

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  3. P.T. Wyant says:

    Geeze! Luiza’s plan sounds more like a party than a date!

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  4. T. M. Hunter says:

    Wow, having your first date together with a bunch of other folks…sounds like a disaster waiting to happen. Fun snippet.

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  5. siobhanmuir says:

    Interesting snippet, Carrie-Anne. I wish him luck. 🙂

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  6. Wouldn’t he be able to recognize her by her feet? I hope she says yes, but throwing a stranger into that big a crowd seems mean to me!

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  7. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Love the way Luiza has just taken over his dating life! And he’s probably too nice to tell her to back off, but he should. A first date is special. He doesn’t need it ruined. Great snippet!

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  8. I don’t know, I take Luiza’s response as optimistic, and it might be less pressure to be in a big group on your first date. Looking forward to finding out!

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  9. Okay, two of those names are major tongue twisters on me. At least Luiza is a bit optimistic the girl will say yes to him. Hopefully that’s not a let down now.

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  10. If his cousin is that excited about him liking a girl, he’s been out of the dating scene a long time. I hope the girl he is looking for is all he hopes she is. Great scene and visuals as always. 🙂

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  11. Quadruple sounds a little terrifying! I love setting a fledgling romance in a library 🙂

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