WeWriWa—A sexy witch



Welcome back to Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday, weekly Sunday hops where writers share 8–10 sentences from a book or WIP. This scene continues a few lines after last week’s, as 20-year-old Katya Koneva has just arrived at an off-campus Halloween party for her first date with notorious skirt-chaser Dmitriy Voroshilov.

Dmitriy, an ensign in the Naval Reserve, is dressed as a magician, and the eight other guests have similar normal costumes. Katya volunteered to wear a very sexy costume, but now she feels extremely underdressed beneath her long red cape. Had she known no one else would be wearing a risqué costume, she never would’ve worn it, but Dmitriy presses her to reveal herself.


Katya sets the flowers on a small bureau with a display of Halloween cards, novelty candles, macabre dolls, and a homemade Halloween tree.  Casting her eyes downwards, she lets her cape fall to the ground.

Dmitriy takes in all her bare flesh and the outlines of her body, showcased in a tight, strapless, black bathing suit, black high heels, and black fishnet stockings.  He begins salivating at this unexpected delight, and feels his trousers growing tighter under his thankfully long jacket.

“What did you do to get such a sweet dish?” the pirate asks. “Are you sure she’s such a good girl?  I could never get a good girl to wear such a revealing costume.”

“She’s such a good girl, she’s never even kissed a man at the age of twenty,” Dmitriy brags. “Unless something’s changed since I last spoke to her about the matter.”


1940s pinup girl Dusty Anderson, in a similar costume

Katya kills Dmitriy’s arousal very quickly with a well-placed fist, as a warning for what’ll happen if he shares such personal information with company again!

For anyone who’s been following my October series about classic silent horror films with landmark anniversaries this year, I’ll be discussing The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari on Monday and Wednesday, and the original Lost World on Friday. Of course, I’ve saved the best for last, and will have several posts about The Phantom of the Opera in the last week of October.


12 comments on “WeWriWa—A sexy witch

  1. The clothes don’t make the witch. hahaha. She must feel so uncomfortable with all the eyes on her.


  2. P.T. Wyant says:

    I love her “warning.” LOL!


  3. Poor thing! But I’m glad Dimitry is punished quickly. He needs to learn how to behave!


  4. This party is very interesting and I love the vintage cards and photos you’re also sharing!


  5. Ugh, those are some smug people–I wouldn’t want to be one of their dates!


  6. I think that maybe she’s going to teach that skirt-chaser a thing or two. 🙂
    I love the Halloween nostalgia, Carrie-Anne!


  7. Ed Hoornaert says:

    You wear a costume like that, you get men to notice you!


  8. I hate spiders. Your page scared me. 🙂 🙂 Love her costume and her reaction to him. Great films to discuss. 🙂 🙂 🙂


  9. elainecsc2013 says:

    Her costume might not fly in your time frame, but it looks great in the picture you shared.


  10. Karysa Faire says:

    Great snippet as I could relate to her feeling vulnerable then pissed.


  11. Haha, I think I would have given the same warning of a punch. Nice snippet. Though I don’t really picture that as a witch.


  12. chellecordero says:

    Nice that you ended this snippet with a punch! I don’t like how he presses her to reveal herself, so controlling.


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