Horny Hump Day—Jakob and Rachel

My What’s Up Wednesday post is here.

Warning:  Not safe for work or appropriate for those under 18!

Welcome back to Horny Hump Day, a weekly hop where writers share three erotic sentences of a book or WIP. My snippet this week immediately follows last week’s, as 19-year-old Lt. Jakob DeJonghe kisses his dream girl, Rachel Roggenfelder, for the first time. She’s a fair bit more experienced than he is, and has to take over to teach him.

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After awhile, he became emboldened enough to try imitating her, while still letting her lead.  His only active role was running his hands through her hair and along her face.  He was burning with desire to touch a lot more than just her hair and face, but he knew respectable people never went from nothing to everything overnight.

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4 comments on “Horny Hump Day—Jakob and Rachel

  1. Author Jessica E. Subject says:

    Oh, I absolutely love him! Excellent snippet! 🙂

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  2. “Respectable people” — that’s a great thought bubble for him. So self-controlled and confident enough to allow her to lead.

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  3. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Perhaps she will get him to re-think what “respectable people” do. LOL Great character insight here.

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  4. I like his thought about nothing to everything overnight, except what they are doing is not “nothing,” and I’m sure she’ll straighten him out. Wonderful snippet, Carrie Anne.

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