Horny Hump Day—Jakob and Rachel

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Warning:  Not safe for work or appropriate for those under 18!

Welcome back to Horny Hump Day, a weekly hop where writers share three erotic sentences of a book or WIP. I’ve been away for awhile, to focus on the Blogging from A to Z April Challenge, and to focus on my release of And Jakob Flew the Fiend Away on May ninth.

This scene is from May 1945, when 19-year-old Jakob and Rachel kiss for the first time. Jakob has only kissed one other girl before, a friend of his who begged him for a kiss the night before they were deported. Rachel has had several previous boyfriends, and knows much more than he does about technique. He’s happy to let his dream girl teach him.

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That night, as they were counting stars, Jakob slipped his violently shaking arm around her and pulled her towards him, then wrapped his other arm around her, leaned down to her height, and kissed her. Rachel seemed to sense that he didn’t really know what he was doing, and he gratefully let her take over and teach him. He let his mouth become soft, pliant, and passive against hers as she demonstrated the techniques she liked.

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4 comments on “Horny Hump Day—Jakob and Rachel

  1. Author Jessica E. Subject says:

    I love his innocence! Great snippet! 🙂

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  2. Chrys Fey says:

    Ha! I love it! I never heard of the Horny Hump Day bloghop. I’ll have to participate in the future. 😉

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  3. Gina says:

    This is a really great snippet!

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  4. Erotic and sweet. Nicely done, Carrie Anne.

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