WeWriWa—An Unusual Delivery

Welcome back to Weekend Writing Warriors, where participants share 8 sentences from a book or WIP. Today’s excerpt comes from Chapter 41, “Roman’s Legacy,” of my current WIP, Journey Through a Dark Forest. It’s January 1938, and young widow Inessa Zyuganova has gone into labor with her third child. Since she’s consistently measured smaller than normal and had concerning heart tones, along with her traumatic injuries and resulting pain relief drugs, she’s elected to birth in a hospital for the first time.

The receptionist is flabbergasted at how she’s brought company for the delivery room, and a midwife in addition to a doctor. Dr. Scholl, Inessa’s very progressive doctor, makes the situation clear to the receptionist in no uncertain terms. He moved away from hospital practice in large part because he didn’t agree with the non-evidence-based obstetrics that came into vogue during the twilight sleep era.


“This is a proper modern hospital.  We don’t have old-country midwives here.  No woman in her right mind would see both a doctor and midwife.”

“Mrs. Kuzmitch has been in practice for thirty-five years.  After she came to this country, she received formal training at the Bellevue Hospital School for Midwives and later took additional classes at Manhattan Midwifery School.  Now my patient, her nurse and midwife, and her friends are going to go into the room she’s booked.  Doctors get final say in what goes on in the delivery room.  Spinster receptionists don’t.”


6 comments on “WeWriWa—An Unusual Delivery

  1. Oh, that last line put someone in her place! Nice 8.


  2. Good for him for being so open minded and progressive! Another excellent excerpt!


  3. I really like him. Great snippet!


  4. Millie Burns says:

    Good for him! Sounds like she needed to be knocked down a peg or two!


  5. Love it! “Spinster receptionists don’t.” Excellent. 🙂 The doctor is very forceful and on his patient’s side. I like that 🙂


  6. Sarah W says:

    The twilight sleep era gives me the shivers! It screwed up a lot of mother-child bonding . . . And there was so much opportunity for abuse.

    I’m glad the doctor put the receptionist in her place!


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